Sunday, February 1, 2009

Untitled #2

I took a walk today.
I went to the park of an elementary school. I don't remember the name.
The playground was abandoned.

Sitting on one of the swings, I passed the time. Counting blades of grass. Watching the clouds change. Observing breath clouds.
I spent the day in the company of ghosts. I woke up alone.

It was dark.

I began to walk home. Drops began falling from the sky. The clouds were crying.
Streetlight by streetlight, I counted. I began to talk to you, saying things I would never say directly.
Lightning crackled. Thunder boomed. Everything froze.

I hate the seasons here.

4 comments:

Bloggin' Babak! said...

Wow your a real good writer charles...

Kiki said...

It seems that you're just getting to something important when you abruptly end it with 'I hate the seasons here.' Don't get me wrong, I like it, but it seems too short. Expand it a bit.

I love the line 'I began to talk to you, saying things I would never say directly.'

Sir Real said...

Bobby-
Thanks.

Keira-
That was the point.

Anonymous said...

I want to read your mind.